You guys have done a really good job. You had a structure that helped make the story a coherent experience in something that could otherwise have been confusing I suspect. The writing was really solid. I'm particularly impressed because it feels very polished. Most entries have some typos, mistakes etc. I think I noticed some Act 3 scenes saying Act 1 in the title? And I think that was it. I wish I had that kind of eye. Felt very professional. And there was a lot of good details that allowed me as a reader to imagine the scenes.