Hey I just played the game! It's very rough but that's what I'd expect from an alpha lol. I think the only issue I really had was the pacing. There were a lot of notes with not much in between. It's not bad at all to have a lot of notes but if there isn't much to do between reading them then the game really feels like it's only about notes. That being said, I do like the attempt at a narrative. I had fun. If you get a chance, check out my playthrough! Thanks for making the game!