Splendid illustrations and general art direction (colors and typography). You've got your share of comments regarding the transitions (I'll probably replay it if you ever update it !) but the "fade all previous text" idea I may steal for a future game !
Great story but I sometimes had a hard time understanding the motive of the NPC I met.
Are there multiple endings ? (looks like I kind of... lost ? but I do not feel I made any wrong choice (but maybe I did !))