Okey so, I got some feedback ^^
First I love how good it looks and it definitely delivers a promising idea. The VA is...off. Hers is OK, sounds a lot like good old re, but his va is too terrible, a bit more expression would awesome.
Then one thing that didn't work for me was the camera when the mc was talking. As low polygon tends to not animate the face, I'd go for more general screens, showing like half her figure, instead of a first of her face. I think it would look great that way ^^
It's really promising, I think it's gonna be great if you finish it 🙈