Just played it and have to say it was by far the best story I have come across on this platform. The ending was really great and the pacing was perfect. Definitely surprised me a few times and can't wait to see what you do in the future :)
(Also god damn you spent $8,000 on this, I am gonna point that out for future commenters so they understand a free game does not mean it was free to develop so support them on their journey as a creator)