Just finished version .21. Overall a good story. I had to skip through most of the unread dialogue, its just too much, smarmy, and repetitive ad nauseum.
Please go read Harry Potter and skip odd chapters... Of course it must be repetitive. I have to say "I love you" 50 times a day whit such harem and they have to say "SOOO DEEP", "SOOO BIG" sooo many times...