I LOVE IT THOUGH I DID CHANGE CROWS PRONOUNS CAUSE YOU PUT HIM WHEN ITD REALLY THEY/THEM BUT OTHER THEN THAT GOOD JOB! YOUR DOING GREAT! I'M GONNA GET CROW OVER HERE TO READ IT!
LOL ITS OKAY, AS LONG AS ITS NOT ON PURPOSE THEY SAID IT WAS OKAY, ANDDDD I TOLD MY FRIENDS THE STORY CAUSE WHY.NOT AND OMG THEY LIVE IT AND WANT A PART 2 SO TMMRW ILL TELL THEM THE PART 2 :)
