I been popping in and out playing this game on and off for honestly i don't know how long maybe since you started working on it and having public versions out I'm honestly not sure since I do recall having really really early versions of this game on my old Laptop and this game has been in very slow development for the past few years. I do very much enjoy this game as this game has been along side some of the greats like CoC and TiTs as well as other games that I am forgetting the names of currently since I am super fucken tired as of writing this.
Anyways I love the concepts that this has and offers along with just being able to more or less have inpact on the city and characters you talk you and are in, it's always great to have the ability to do something and make a choice and actually see the pros and cons to that and having to constantly deal and see it rather then just it being a one and done thing and then being forgotten.
I will honestly say though that the one thing that i have always found to be well, troubling and hard for me to really stay focused on is the writing, especially with the earlier pieces that have been there since the beginning. More later content is a lot more fleshed out and cleaner with a lot less typos. (There are quiet a bit of typos in early Content) A lot of the writing seems written by someone who English is not their first language if you can get my meaning? A good example of this is during Sartornea's Questline after running into the Alchemist and you learn of something. One of the lines reads
"You tell your guards to let go of the man and just leave, defeated. You can't face them after making them waste all this time in a sensless mission. The guards feel just as bad as you did and get out of the town, leaving the three of you alone."
I ain't a english major I ain't a writer and I honestly hate English in general, however just it's really hard to get focused into the story the lore and the game itself and be invested into the matieral when most of the early and mid content is written like this. With sentences and lines that make you feel like you are reading the google translation to a JP game. This game has been ongoing for a few years so perhaps once you are able to if possible at all I would think it would best if you sat back and went back to a lot of your older content and re write and edit it so that the writing just seems more fleshed out as it should be considering that content is older then the virus that's plaguing our world is. We are almost on year 2 of that and this Game is almost reaching it's 4th year if not already passed it.
Love your work and I really do look forward to seeing how this all looks once you finally break Alpha and hit that big 1.0.0 Mark.
Just need a reread and edit of the content that's been there at some point is all
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Hello! I think some features have not been developed properly, but we are quite consistent with our updates (we've been focusing on having enough content for each character. That's it, adding the ability to corrupt them and sexy scenes). We are proud to say that we are almost done with that, and we're in working on other aspects of the game (not in this current releases), mostly polishing what we already have and removing current placeholders (like the texts you have when you visit a store, or a character)
November release will be a big one for us, because it's not just a big content update, but also because we want to show a little of what we mean by making the city more reactive to what you do.
I also agree that the early content is... well, it can be done better, and I want to go back and edit some of these early texts, but I've been lacking time as of late. After november, though, I think I'll be able to focus on all of these aspects of the game, because I agree with the points you are making