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Very nice work.  I liked the premise you created. We can pretty much all relate to the experience of waking up at night and being afraid of what might be lurking right outside our bedroom door.  The creepy thing about being a young kid is that at such hours of the night, the mind can play tricks on you. Every sound becomes magnified, every creak in the night becomes a monster in our minds. My biggest note would be to consider how the ending is delivered. The game kind of ends abruptly, and for me it left me confused about how to feel.  I do feel bad for the protagonist, but because it's a short game, it's hard to feel too bad because there isn't enough time to get emotionally invested in him before the ending is revealed. You've got the outlines of a good story here that just needs some more fine tuning to become something awesome. Please keep making content and keep up the good work!

Omg, thank you so much for the feedback. I'll try way better next time!

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Thank YOU.  Always be encouraged; you developed this game and you have great potential. I hope years from now you'll still be developing games and that each one will be better than the last. Hit me up with your future projects! Would love to play them. Thanks again man!