This is pretty solid considering that it was written in under 48 hours! :0 If you ever decide to progress this story further I'd love to play it again!
Other than that, I caught a bug and some typos, which is understandable considering how little time you had to create this VN! (And honestly I relate, because I couldn't work on my submission for a long time due to moving to a different country, which resulted in a rushed release and lots of typos in-game adfvdgbth) Here's one example of what I noticed, I decided to let you know in case you'd want to update the game! ^^
