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Alright, so...I'm not sure if you'll ever see this, but based off playthroughs I've seen, I'd like to make a criticism of the game's story.

I'm not a huge fan of it.

If I remember correctly, you said you were inspired by stuff such as The Walten Files and Petscop. I don't mind inspiration at all. The problem is, it feels too much like the games you're inspired by and too little of its more original qualities. The Walten Files was technically inspired by FNAF, but differentiates in multiple different ways that make it original. I'm not saying you're a bad writer; I'm just saying that the story could use multiple improvements to make it stand out more.

Another minor non-story criticism I have involve some minigames forcing you to restart everything (including cutscenes) after one mistake. Stuff like that can get annoying and time-consuming quick. You should at least include a lives system where messing up three or even five times forces you to restart.

What about the story is similar? I can’t think of a single thing that is. The Walten Files has people being stuffed into animatronics at a pizza place and Petscop, yeah I don’t really understand the story of Petscop. It’s cool vibes though.

Well...perhaps I should've been more specific. You're inspired by Bunnyfarm, and while I get that, it does venture a bit too far into its formatting. (Beginning cutscenes + minigame that goes wrong quick + deep lore).

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I wasn't inspired by Bunnyfarm. I didn't even know what Bunnyfarm was until releasing the first demo of the game. I was inspired by games like Alphabet Park, Jumpstart Games, Petscop, and Doki Doki Literature Club. Any similarities to Bunnyfarm are completely coincidental. It is really odd how similar they are though, because now everyone is just going to think I copied something else which just wasn't the case.

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My apologies (for both my tone and the late reply). I usually prefer reacting to other people play horror games (as I hate having to experience loud noises and jumpscares myself), and also tend to carry a cynical tone around recent horror games I find due to being disappointed with releases I had hope for in the past. I'll delete my comment if it upsets you.