Thanks so much for all your hard work, it's difficult to make a game in such a short time and I think you did a really good job.
Last time I was definitely playing the latest build and not the old one. I downloaded it again tonight and tried again and I was able to beat it! The scrolling felt much better. The redacting felt a little better too but maybe that's just in my head?
Something that helped was knowing that if I finish the last redaction in a round, the doors will close by themselves.
Another technique that was useful is using the couch when both doors are open. When you press F it will teleport you to the couch, then press F again to stand up, and it lets you cross the room very quickly.