I really hate Matt, which is why the blackmail route is one of my favorites. Some suggestions:
- A picture of a girl flashing her panties isn't very good blackmail material and while it could ruin her reputation, it doesn't seem anywhere near enough to get her expelled. It's also not really enough to get her to strip naked in a locker room for him. He really needs some better blackmail material to make the rest of the plotline fit better. I felt like I had to have her act out of character before he got enough blackmail that she wouldn't have a choice but to obey.
- I tried ignoring him later in the game by not going to any rooms he texted me to meet him in, yet there were no consequences and the game continued on as if you'd obeyed. It would be interesting to see alternative endings for disobeying based on how much blackmail material he has at the time.
- Matt offering Damien to do things to you is an interesting idea I'd like to see more with. Matt corrupting a mutual crush between you and Damien by forcing you to do things with him watching or forcing you to allow him to participate would be a good addition.
- There's a scene where Matt has you naked with the collar on and writing words all over your body. There's not much payoff since he's the only one to see it. It would be a lot better if he took you on a walk outside like that and forced you into the begging position in front of strangers while you have the writing on your body.
Overall, I like the plotline more blackmail-focused and less of a voluntary sub/dom relationship. I'm definitely looking forward to where the plotline leads in future updates.