Also a few minor typos.
When examining Living Crossbow: "When the user's MP if full" if -> is
"Finally, the serpents gives up the chase." serpents -> serpent
"Let's move on, Splayername." when hiring Cassie -> $playername
Line break stuff: "You contemplate the view for a long time" in the snowfield, and also when Hjafnir offers to join you.