I chose a game randomly to install but I really ended up liking it. The story is great and the plot has a lot to offer. I'm curious about what happens next. Also liked the choices you can make and the way they lead you to different stuff xD
Something that jumped to my attention were the phrases like "In the name of Zianna" that were added to Sebastien,Jori and Lyrissa. I suppose they are meant to give the characters more personality and something the reader can tie to them, but at least in the first part, from what I think, they were used too often. It's a fine line, because, since all these characters have them, even tho they are different, it can also make them seem more like one. They tend to repeat those rather often.
For example, if we look at Aldrias, the "sorry' that he says does add more image to his personality. There are indeed people like this, but it felt more natural coming from him. Not saying you have to change what I spoke about, but said I'll leave it here. Some kind of random opinion, i guess :)
Looking forward to the full game ^_^