The story is amazingly engaging I actually was suprised and outraged with what happened to chuck in his past and I found it difficult to play this just for the pleasure of the mature content. I did find few times where the dialog was off because of an extra word being thrown in but they were far and few between that it didn't bother me at all and it kind of fit because when your having a charged conversation it makes sense that you won't always talk in perfect english. The art is top notch I thought because it was a ren'play that it would be a little clunky but to my suprise it was beautifully done all the way through. I know that every time the relationship took another I felt I was actually taking that step with the characters. The use of mostly first person perspectives for the main character really added the the ability to be immersed in the story. I look forward to seeing this story continue and even the sequel that is talked about in the ending scene of chapter 3. You did an amazing job on this story and I know that you said this is an experament of your and that your trying something new with story but you did such an amazing job so far with this that I wouldn't have been able to tell if. For those who are looking for a casual story driven spicy game this is definatly worth a try and don't worry if your not to big into the taboo side of fetishism because the whole story basically says that they are two fully grown adults and so it shouldn't matter. So far this game is a 10/10 and only getting better.