For a first game, I really liked it for the gameplay style, the environment of the mansion and the story. After reading the actual story afterwards, I believe there could have been a little more to represent the story of the lady in the portrait. Reading some text from a journal for example would have been one way to approach that. Either way you still did pretty well for the time you had and I would definitely be interested in seeing more of this style from you, very nice!
Thank you for your feedback and nice video!
There will be notes around the mansion that you can collect that will give more depth to the story in a future update, I hope you can play it again in the future.
Also I'm glad to know that you're interested on my projects, I'm planning to do more using this style and also experiment with other art styles, stay tuned. :)