It has some great ideas going! Really enjoyed the camera section with the scanning, I think that in itself had a lot of potential, I wanted to explore a bit more, and maybe walk through ducts or something hahaha!
The visuals for the monitors and the scanners was on point! The characters were very minimalist but I know with the time we had, we had to do what we could.
The story sometimes was a bit difficult to follow, maybe a bit more elaboration or continuation between the logs would have added more suspense.
As for the ending I expected a bit more dread out of it, but it was sort of anti climatic.
The sound was sort of lacking, which is a big aspect of horror, i think with a bit more sound it would have made the game a lot better as well.
Overall the game was fun, had some good ideas, and I think has potential for more!