I can't say how much this game is unique and fun.
Gameplay 5/5: even with just a simple typing mechanic it fits so well with the whole game concept, sometimes it has some inconsistencies, but overall it is pretty well done. Also this mechanic is later extended and explored more in the last part, which just proves that this was perfect for what the game needed.
Originality 5/5: honestly, when I first started this game I couldn't believe it. I was expecting some 2d plataform, maybe 2d top down, some other stuff with movement and boxes, but a visual novel is such a interesting idea that almost no one did, Rn I have played only one visual novel in this jam that was "The Dating Game" . And It extends beyond the genre to create an interesting and fun narrative. This game is definitely a game I hadn't even imagined playing in this jam.
Presentation 5/5: the art is amazing, the music fits well, and of course the clips and videos are hilarious. Just great stuff.
Theme 5/5: it is a foddian, it has some challenge and difficult without being extremely frustrating to play.
Overall, I just laughed so much with the videos, clips and what I had to type. Before I start the game I was planning to spend 10 minutes playing this game, but when I saw, I already finished the game after playing for about 30 minutes without even noticing. It is a creative and interesting approach for this jam. Definitively a well done 10 days game jam. I would say that the end was too much abrupt, but the whole game is so fun and hilarious to play. Nice job.
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when i was sent the third cutscene’s video (those cutscenes are videos that i just put in the game), i hadn’t seen much of the script and was laughing so much at it. all the art and comedy was from timmy. thanks for the amazing comments for our game, and i’m so happy you had so much fun with it.
ps: the ending bit was cut off because the last bit was really buggy and we wanted people to still win. i’ll maybe consider doing a post jam bug fixup where this and some other issues get ironed out.