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+ Like finding a unicorn! That colorful and hopeful sensation.
+ Beautiful!! I can't wait to hear what it sounds like~
+I like that you came prepared and thorough with the pitch. Shows your determination!

- Concerns about how aspects of the game would gel.
- Main menu design which could be WIP. If so, cool!!

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Thanks for the feedback! 

Please feel free to do a 10 minute playthrough and let us know how to improve the gameplay. ;-)