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Badwerewolf3 years ago (1 edit)

Hey V4 just wanted o say I'm enjoying te premise of the game and like the characters so far the story is both easy and hard to follow as, for me, the story seems a bit disjointed and rushed. I prefer a bit more build up and a more natural flow to relationships and story arcs. If that is how you want to write it don't mind me as I am really interested in the story and want to see where it goes. I am looking forward to the next update.


Hope you don't mind me shortening your handle down, hard not to after seeing the V4 companies lol.

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V4mpire Games3 years ago(+1)

Haha, no problem on shortening when I do it for things within the story, partly being can get a little weird with certain things if playing myself and using the name "V4mpire" in it.

As for disjointed and rushed, you're this first to mention this, at least in a way i've seen it as such maybe, however it might be in part due to my original idea, myself and others felt was too vanilla and with the decision to change it up meant that Chapter 1 became more of a bridge as to not just "jump" into the changes.

Hoping that with the release of Chapter 2 though, that things slow down some(at least feel that way from the readers point of view) and make a little more sense as to what's going on, since right now as many have said, they're a little confused on things, especially with how the MC just accepts what's going on around him and nothing from his point of view has been mentioned.

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