Awesome job! Beautifully laid out story! Like a graphical novel, but where you actually perform some actions. An interesting way of telling the story. Theme matches Edgar Alan Poe style.
The end was awesome! Poetic Justice. And there were some shocking and horrifying effects just before the final scene, really liked that. The depiction of 4 floor building, nearby pole etc. are awesome, true to the original novel. And the changed storyline in the end is also superb. And did I mention the newspaper? Looks so cool. Read the newspaper clips from start to end. Voice acting is excellent.