This in one of my favs, it got a lot of things right. However, I noticed that the game tries way too hard to be wholesome in almost every scenario that it just comes across as unrealistic, nobody is going to be giving life advice and be super duper supportive to someone they've just met 5 minutes ago, everyone is extremely positive almost all the time it actually gets tiring to read.
Speak for yourself. i find it Fine as it is.
The main purpose of such a story is to entertain the Reader so they get enjoyment out of the experience. And i dare say that the Wholesomenis IS what draws most readers into this world.
And since most of the advices come from parents that give them to friends of ther sons, i find that part fitting as well.