Huuum... Well. I didn't understand very much.
There are good ideas, but I seriously don't know why the timer exists. I won in 5 minutes I think, I was with a weird women aand...
Maybe I was too tired to understand, If so I'm sorry.
However, your story seems to have some interressant details and idea.
Ps : Oh, It's not so much important but... Your thumbnail isn't attractive, sorry to say that... Artwork or a screen of the game would be more efficient ?