I liked the story of the game, especially when there was no candyman, so it adds a realistic side in the game.
However, I think that the story could be more developped, especially on the kids' feelings side (their fear of Candyman haha), with maybe a kind of "Hide and Seek" or something else (maybe they run for their lives, "Candyman" chased the kids and then, when trapped, the truth is revealed?)
But the story is a good one, a bit short but funny.