I really enjoyed playing this. It was almost a meditation until the last level and the last gift! lol. I think you could have kept it shorter and still had as much impact to be honest. For a jam I would have stuck with one level and used the spare time to refine. I thought of a mechanic as I played that could up the anti. Avoid awake children spotting you type vibe. It could have a very gentle stealth element to it. All in all I very much enjoyed playing it.