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I have mixed feelings on this one; the endings felt very abrupt, there were a lot of errors in spelling and grammar, and I wasn't quite sure of Sunako's purpose in the narrative, but on the other hand, it had a certain nostalgic charm to it!

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Thanks for your feedback!By the way,it was our first ever project made and English isn't our first language,but we will try to improve it in the future.Sunako will have a more important role in the next game.We really appreciate it man!!!

If you're willing to send me the script or Ren.Py file, I'd be more than happy to touch up the grammar for you!

I will send you the script.

Thank you very much! How are you planning on sending it?

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Well,i dont know really.You have a skype account ?Or something like that?

You could try PMing it to me at /u/AlpacaSparkle on Reddit!

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Ok,i will then.

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I will pm  in the morning.

Thank you very much! 

Sorry i didnt pm you, i was away on holiday and didn't have an internet connection.I won't be pm-ing you, because we want to make a new game.

*pm you*

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And about the endings,I will make them longer,I made made them short because i thought we already dragged the story on too much and we didn't have any images left to use,so I thought that I should make the endings shorter,otherwise we would get comments for not having enough images.