The game seems interesting and has good potential but the English is really bad. Repeatedly confused his/her/he/she and sometimes it seems the characters mean to say the opposite to what is written in the dialogue. It's really hard to follow. Moreover, "skip" doesn't work, so it's impossible to go back to some scene and fast forward the content you've already seen. Hope you'll find a native speaker to help you with the dialogues and this can be a very good game.
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