Really dark, but in a way I could get into (tho made harder to get into knowing it's loosely based on real people, but change the names and I'm totally down). I enjoyed reading it, and I'll keep fingers crossed that chapter two may one day come out (even if it's also just more a fic than a text adventure)
P.S. the notes at the end of the PDF for later plot points sounds like really wild sitcom episode titles. Jeff Cracks the Whip. Abby Find The Real Ben. Ben Witnesses A Murder. Always Sunny but shot like a police procedural.