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What the hell even happened in this VN? There are so many typos, wrong character names in the name box, and wrong pronouns in this. I'm having a hard time following most of the specific details because the wrong names are being used and wrong names in characters' lines. I'm willing to forgive the fact that decisions don't matter, but you could have put more decisions or plot twists with the "Disgusting" decision. Perhaps make it have a different route it you click it three to five times. I liked the art, but the story and dialogue leaves a lot to be desired. I'm not saying you need to  make this AAA tier, but at least not something as ill written as this. I was thinking of so many things going through, but nothing that resulted with a good payoff with what was presented.