I tried yours ^_^
There are a lot of spelling errors, so much so that the whole kitchen conversation left me confused. Art style is a bit hit and miss. Liam looks incredibly cute, while on the other hand with the Malkavian I'm confused which way they hands are facing. Personally not a fan of the numbers ending. Multiple playthroughs are fine, but I rather there was something more story based than just a whole bunch of numbers, as that just felt a bit like a cop out.
On the upside it is lengthy, the sounds are fitting and when the art style is not doing a number on me trying to figure out hands, it is cute :)
Hi Mirta,
thanks for playing. I haven't finish watching the video yet, but thank you for being critic, then critic is for learning. And I definitely shout learn how to write English. XD
This was technically one of my biggest fears, that someone is just sitting there an understands nothing. And yes, you definitely can see in which part of drawing I but time and in which no time was left, like the Malkavien. Just drawing a body and arms and use the turn tool is definitely not a good way to do, but probably the fastest. But as long you have had fun everything is fine.
I still think for the first try in my life it could be even worse. XD