Hey! I thought this was pretty cool and am definitely going to be keeping tabs on it :) the atmosphere is really good and I love that it asks more original questions. The face distortion part was what REALLY got to me :o
If I had one critique, it would be the language. I'm assuming English is not your native language; and there's nothing wrong with that! It's perfectly good for 90% of it, but there are a couple of errors that can take you out of the atmosphere a little. I recommend for the full game you get someone to proofread the script for you just to make sure it's all well and good :O
Other than that, I am VERY interested in seeing where this goes!! :D