It's unfortunate that it made you feel that way, but I'm not rewriting it. Darius is just being Darius, and I read the scene with a completely different feeling than how you do. I don't expect everyone to always see eye to eye with what I write. Isn't the firs timet, probably won't be the last time, but I'm fine with that.
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After further reflection, I've decided to ask: What feeling do you get from that scene?
Darius has just done the same thing to MC that Vernon once did to Chester. It's no secret I'm not the most observant person on the planet, but it's plainly obvious even to me that Vernon was written as an unrepentant asshole... so what am I not seeing here, that's meant to make Darius look any different?