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Crunchyleaf Path: You have done a great job with orchestration. The string, flute, piano/harp, and tambourine work together to create an epic RPG adventure sound. You also have a very solid melody that is well-written, easily followable, and supported by the harmony, but also not too predictable.

Spirit of Frosty Perseverence: The way this song starts slow and accelerates throughout the piece is subtle, but definitely adds to the building intensity throughout. I also appreciate how you emphasized beats 2 and 3 quite heavily giving a strong waltzy quality that helps drive the piece forward.

Spirit of Tides and Courage: The spacing of the original melody with the strings interjecting in the beginning gives the sense that there is danger approaching. The use of the deep taiko/bass drums is spectacular in this piece. The flowy string and piano arpeggio parts are my favorite sections of this song and definitely give me the sense of being on a ship in the sea.

Overall: It is evident that these tracks have been composed with great care and attention to detail. You have an excellent sense of melody, and when to exchange the melody with another instrument or when the right time is to flare with a background instrument. The crunchyleaf path and the spirit of tides and courage tracks sound very similar so I’m not sure that the imagery of autumn contrasting with summer is abundantly clear, but they are both well-crafted tracks that portray different emotions and situations well. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work!

Thank you for taking the time on the detailed feedback, I really appreciate it!