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What native language do the devs speak? Because it's not English, this is so terribly written, I couldn't stand trying to play it for more than 20 minutes.
If you're going to make a plot-driven game in English, then PLEASE get a native English speaker to write it.
Because this is terrible, incorrect grammar, stiff weird adjectives and verbs, I can barely tell what these characters are actually trying to say.
Hire a native speaker to rewrite it.

ehh? I was able to read it just fine ngl

"Being able to read it." Is the BARE MINIMUM for writing. I was 'able to read it' just fine, but I didn't know EXACTLY what the characters were TRYING to say through all the broken grammar, misspelled words, and incorrectly used phrases without inferring. When you have to infer the meaning of a sentence, because the sentence is incorrect, that is BAD WRITING.

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I would like to apologize dearly for your almost unacceptable experience with the game. Currently the dev team can only speak Korean having to use translators. This is clearly no longer a good plan, and I will discuss this complaint with our executive producer thank you for your time!

No problem, thanks for your response. I'm a writer myself and enjoy games primarily for their storylines, writing, and dialog.
So trying to play this game was almost unbearable for me, despite the art and other aspects being fairly solid.
Good luck with your development into the future.