Spoilers?
Throughout my read, I noticed a lot of "I"s(as in the pronoun) were put into use, such as:
"I came here in peace and I mean no harm to you."
In my opinion, the pronouns used in some sentences are kind of, rigid? And many of them could be simplified:
"I came here in peace, and mean no harm to you."
or
"I slowly open my eyes into consciousness and soon, I just realised that I was..."
to
"I slowly open my eyes into consciousness, and soon realised that I was..."
Love the VN otherwise. Have a good holiday!
PS: Those arms of the MC are kinda thicc for a "tech geek" :)