Pretty nice. Really like how you used RPG Maker to make a Pseudo-Visual Novel with exploration. All the portraits are really good, and I kinda like how their Overworld Sprites look. The only issues I had were the fact that I almost couldn't find every Loonie, and I got scared that I'd be locked out of at least one TF (mainly due to my own incompetence), and that the Coffee girl says [Something to Read] instead of [Something to Drink], and I forgot that she asked for coffee. Other than those two moments, everything here was pretty damn good. Nice work!
Sidenote: I'm an idiot and didn't realize that RPG Maker had "Modern City" sprites. Oops.