The opening and mid section where excellent, the pacing towards the end felt a bit rushed, but the ending was pretty satisfying. Also the gender diverse presentation was really nice! And loved the artwork and character writing.
All in all a pretty good game with a world and characters I would like to explorer more.
Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback!
Definitely looking at doing something longer next time around. We wanted to do something shorter & snappier in this first one, more in line with the pacing of older crime fiction (I've read a lot of Lawrence Block, haha) and wanted to do similar pacing which I think doesn't quite like up with the medium.
Keeping our paws crossed for much bigger next time. Monstrous even.
-Kaiju
