Post by jadih96207 in Game created! - Version 0.1 (Prologue and Chapter 1) comments

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Seen this over at F95

This isn't much but it makes the intro look better.

Things you might want to consider:

Not sure why you didn't add sound to the Main Menu.
Include link to your Itch.io page as easy advertising. Filling in the About info is a good idea too.
Seems like the font you used for the game title is Courier New so used that.
Made some icons for the game.

You can review the changes I made with https://winmerge.org

Good luck with your game!

Ey! Thanks for the heads up! Applied everything (and more!) except for the itch.io link.