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OMG where to start, i spent like 2 hours playing this game. I killed the penultimate patient though T.T Was really convinced they ate the poisoned ox meat but apparently not? Anway let's move onto the review:

  • Use of Theme - 5
    • You can't get a better use of the theme than this imo. It goes very well along the intended interpretation by the Game Jam host.
  • Gameplay - 4
    • I think depending on the person this game can be either very engaging (for someone like me) nor very boring for someone with a low attention span or is a lazy reader. I spent so much time reading through all the files and making connecting charts to figure out who knew who and where they were. It was so much fun! The only issues were some typos here and there, some dates that made no sense, like the date of birth would be after the date of admission, and the missing files mentioned in the game page. But all of those can be overlooked and they didn't ruin the experince one bit. Seriously a really good experince.
  • Creativity - 5
    • Can i give a 10/5? Seriously how can you come up with this whole detailed story within a month? It was so immersive and well thought out, the plot twists made me gasp out loud ahahah. Seriously congratulations on the writing, if it wasn't good i wouldn't have finished it.
  • Art - 4
    • The art of the game consists of an just an UI but it complements the game perfectly. I would change some of the icons to something a little bit more alusive to what they represent but other than that i really enjoyed it.
  • Sound - 4
    • There was only a bgm and a typing sound (that i remember). They did the job, the bgm was a bit annoying after an hour though xdd. I would have loved something like a voice recording just for variance but i understand that with just a month to develop it would be maybe too ambitious.

I hope you expand this game into something bigger because i'm invested in the story now ahaha.

P.S. i hated how conveniently some key information was always corrupted ahahaha.

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Thanks for the feedback ShadowGrif. Wow 2 hrs! You really got into it so far as to find inconsistencies on birthdates.

You got it right she did eat the Ox Meat. After looking at the files and discussing with my brother we noted that there is an inconsistency in the ox file. It eats Soldier Wasps but the treatment section erroneously mentions the Carpenter Ant - it should be the Wasp treatment. We honestly were crunching out so much story content in the last 72hours that it was probably inevitable that these errors crept through.

I will pass on your Kudos to my brother - he wrote most the story (except the treatment files which I did). He will be happy to hear you enjoyed it so much.

We had a third member of the team that is a music producer but he didn't get time to participate as much as he would have liked. We are going to engage him to see what other music/effects we can add to increase immersion.

P.S. yeah that corruption is awfully convenient. Almost like it was on purpose hahaha