I didn't mean to be like "MC choose that" or "Cordelia choose this" you know that better than me.
But the way the text is written and said gives that impression.
It's nice to see that you know what you want to do. And as i said, it sometimes feels like the Narrator is Cordelia herself, or at the very least as if Cordelia hears what the Narrator says. In any case that's an interresting approach.
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Of course, and I think I understand you better now! While my lips are sealed on some story elements here, let my just say this:
What you're feeling is exactly what I originally hoped you would.
Things will make much more sense later - assuming the project gains support and I'll be able to continue it into the future!