Dude, your works are totally lit
A bit gay but still great XD. I do like how you draw the characters, the personality also fits properly (man, I could say it has the vibe of an anime series)
I'm not seeing any other moves yet like story track shifts aside from narration but it's still quite nice to see how you make each chapter neat.
A bit surprised by how artemi changed within three days, maybe the change was too fast? Her usual meekness is totally gone when the third day struck
Nonetheless, I know you have reasons to why there's a personality spurt