Oh, so this really is the public version and not the demo? I guess I just jumped the gun and assumed it was still the demo that was currently being worked on, or something like that. I definitely have to say you've done great work on this so far.
Not only that, but I hope there's more to come and that you can update this more frequently than just once a month sometime sooner or later in the future
I'm sorry to keep bothering you about this, but I'm just wondering about how long you plan to work on this demo here before you make this into a completely full-blown public version with all the fine little details you want in it neatly tied in, nicely fitted, as well as worked out as perfectly as you want it in order for the story the main character is playing through to be enjoyed by everyone and/or anyone that just happens to want to know what kind of situations/scenarios/circumstances the MC will experience as the choices are presented along the way?
Do you really believe that you yourself aren't a good writer, despite the fact that you've put together such a unique and intricate world here, especially when you are still building that world up as you continue updating this visual novel project of yours, thus thereby making it just as good if not better than it already was before?
Huh, from the way all those characters have those dialogs and conversations from the start of this project to its current progress it seemed to me that English was the first and foremost language that you or anybody else working together with you on this was the most familiar and well versed in to any/all of you or it was maybe even possibly part of your heritage in some way or another especially with how all the interactions between all the characters that have appeared in this visual novel of yours seemed so smooth and well-thought-out from the beginning, middle, to the very current point of this story so far, but that is only if you aren't finding that to be too offended/offensive too much in any shape or form by my saying that at all right here and now of course?
One other thing I want to say is even if you don't find or think that the development of the world that you've built the story upon involving this vision novel of yours is quite the way you want it, I want to say that with what you've done with it so far it seems like it's progressing as smoothly and patiently as it can especially as we view the perspective of the world from the main character's eyes and see what kind of trouble and issues/situations/scenarios they might end up in whether it's something that they had willingly chosen for themselves beforehand or not from the very start of your visual novel project to right here and now at the current point of the story it's definitely all something that draws you at the moment you start reading it, and you're eagerly awaiting what happens next to the main character all while the various readers are waiting for the next update/upload to the current progress of the story and where it'll all go from there later on down the line in the future including if it will become a long-running franchise in and of itself or if it will have multiple/numerous kinds of prequels, sequels, spinoffs, continuations, etc. to it or maybe perhaps you do a complete reboot/remake/remaster for the project as a whole or possibly continue working on both the old and the new, so there's a bit of variety in neither one depending on which one the players went to try out including if they want to do both of them at the same time but however you decide to do it I am sure that it will be an enjoyable VN for however long it can go on and what kind of projects you might do right after you finish it or you happen to continue it in a different kind of VN altogether but whatever/however you decide to do it in either case I'm sure that you'll have plenty of fans who will follow that project of yours for as long as they want for along with whenever out might decide to improve and/or progress your current VN and then work on a new one with it as detailed, clear, straightforward, precise, thorough, meticulous, accurate, exact, and et cetera as you want it from now till so very much later on/in the upcoming time that lays/lies ahead if that happens to make much or any sense to you at all that is?
