Hi, I saw your game with HonestDan and decided to give it a try. It is really complex and weird. There are clues that are a bit subjective and hard to understand. I don't know exactly what is the character's main struggle though I have a few theories. Some feedback:
-Your game reminds me to "Milk inside a bag of milk" https://store.steampowered.com/app/1392820/Milk_inside_a_bag_of_milk_inside_a_ba...
-Gameplay is pretty good, mechanics are tight and it feels good walking and investigating around
-Puzzle needs more story and there should be a direct message telling you something changes when you decide not to do things like "Don't fix the clock"
-You need somebody to proofread the english version! I am sure there're people willing to localize your game for free in Reddit as long as you put them on the credits!
-The music when you go to sleep is too happy. There are really good resources on the internet to use free music. Maybe try classical music or look for Creative Commons songs that you can use freely
-I think you can make a big version of this game without a crowdfunding, but I would charge for it and put this version as a demo or maybe tell its just a "prologue"
I may seem harsh, but I feel there's something here that has potential. Puzzles and complex themes are very cool and can have meaning and depth that other games lack.
I think you should start making another chapter and iterate with all the things you did great on this game which are:
-Base mechanics are perfect, you discover things and get different endings while discovering the story
-Simple graphics work very good.
-RPG Maker is a good way to show off your art (not the graphics, but your writing), specially when the main focus is the story and puzzle.
-The day-loop idea is very cool but I think you can expand on this a bit more
-I like the mystery. I like learning and theorizing what's wrong with the character
Keep making games! :D