I just learned that reviews are invisible to other users for some mysterious reason only itch.io knows. ;) So I am posting my review here for the reference of others.
Rating: 2 stars
I do like the concept, and there are two things which would make this a 3- or even 4-star game:
1) Have someone check your grammar and spelling. There is a grammar mistake at the very beginning of every game, and I spotted a spelling error in the first five minutes of play.
2) Add more potential outcomes. I feel like the game's intended artistic message is diluted by the fact that so many (all?) the endings are unhappy ones. Also, remove or rework the ending message; it seems a bit pedantic. Good luck, and thank you for sharing your work with us!