I think it was just mysterious enough to keep you guessing until you had all the pieces. It was really interesting. My only suggestion, even though it's a fairly short experience, maybe being able to progress the dialog at my own pace would be nice for when you're trying to go back find the other endings instead of having to slog through the same bits over and over. It's a small suggestion but it might just be a me thing lol
Also I was curious if the story that is associated with it, was it something you came up with? It's rare to see like an actual separate story connected to games and it was nice to be able to go back and learn about the story after playing