Man, you can just take your description and turn that in for Round 3. You're going to be a beast in the next round with your narrative skills.
I loved the Squid Game overtone and heartbreaking setup and the epic music during the battle!? What an excellent journey this has been with Randy3000 ... so far. I hope his saga continues.
Killed it with this line, both made me laugh and quite sad at the same time:
"If he had only done better in school, if he had only went to college instead of practicing this stupid talent of his, maybe his son, maybe Jaden, would be ok."