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I finished this piece (current content) and I have to say... it's great and horrible at the same time.. animations are great, even some models (not Iris, she is ugly as hell) and much of the text is ok, but it's heavily scripted.. so heavily that I have to plan, if I want to play it, because there's not much room for saving between the dialogues, scenes and scripts and I have to play a lot to get to the point where I can save the game and I totally dislike this.. it's not a freedom, it's just watching and reading until I get the room to save the game..

about reading, there's a really too much text and I don't really mind if there's an animation playing, but still, it's a lot of text, lot of unnecessary text like describing what's happening on the screen.. when I want to just skip some parts or I quickly play it second time, it's still long and take long time until it ends..

the story is dumb and makes no sense in any kind of world you put it in.. being a male in this world is extremely bad luck and I would probably kill myself after few things what happened to the MC or other guys.. there's also no real in game options except choose who humiliate you.. you can't even avoid some gross things, but I appreciate I could have skipped some of those..

I don't know what to say, I see so much work put in this project, but on the other side it's for the worse, because there's no gameplay at all.. this thing doesn't really need to have any type of player's input and it still would be the same.. the game needs to be fun and needs to have a gameplay, some game cycle.. this project is more of a walking simulator with very little walking space and too much text to read.. sorry, it's just not a game..

Taco72 years ago (1 edit)

If you press "L" you can cycle through fast forward speeds. It makes it a lot easier to skip through the text, if you don't want to read it.

As far as gameplay, it's a dating sim (albeit a fucked up one). The gameplay is making choices about who you will end up with at the end of the game. Admittedly not a ton of gameplay, but no less then most other dating sims.

Be nice to Iris! She used to have a hideous haircut as well. What can I say, I like a plain looking girl, It's become very clear to me since making the game that that is not a popular opinion.

Submale2 years ago(+1)

I guess I should have said, after I read the whole text and load the game to experience different choice, after that I was using "L" for 10x speed and this part with 10x speed was still very long.. also this number (10x) doesn't disappear until you open menu and close it, which was a real challenge, when the game is so heavily scripted.. well, this was the main complain for the long text.. when I played it through with animation I don't really minded so much text, although sometimes it was really tedious, when I don't liked what was happening in the animation..

The game would be good, if you can choose what you want to experience.. if, for instance, the player wants to experience futa content, he should have the choice to push MC right way to experience it, but here you haven't such an option, except for dating perhaps.. and also if the player don't like futa content, he should have the option to avoid it..

I liked part when you get to choose, which girl you wanna date, but it was not very good described, what can you expect from the girl you picked. I had to go through all of them and save/load what I want in the end, but still don't know if it's already a final choice or just a first taste..

And Iris.. I don't mind her plain look, I like plain looking girls too, but not really brown hair with brown eye ones, it's too plain for me, but it's a game, so whatever.. I'm also not a big fan of makeups and I really love freckles, so she would be a perfect choice right ?! but no, she is looking very weird.. almost like she has down syndrome or something, especially when she is smiling and I can't get over it.. also I don't like Mistress's look and I really don't like her behavior at all, it's psychopat in my opinion.. I would choose rather cruel girl over a psychopat..

btw: why MC have so small dick ?!

Taco72 years ago

it sounds like you want it to be a sandbox game, but that's not what I'm making.

You can skip futa content if you want.

He has a small dick so he can be humiliated for it. It's a femdom game.

Submale2 years ago

no, I don't want it to be a sandbox game, I just don't like game so heavily scripted.. it's better when the game have a cycle, like you have to get money by doing sexual things and pay to someone for something or buying stuffs.. if not money, then building relationship with someone or multiple people by doing sexual things with them to increase/decrease their sympathy or something like that.. just a thought, no suggestion, take it as you will..

yes you can skip it, but it was just an example, I don't mind futa content.. I wanted to say, if player want to see something, then he/she should have the option to make particular steps to get it.. the player needs to have some sort of control, not just accept everything what's happening and can't do a thing about it..

I thought so, but it shouldn't be so extremely small, it's almost disgusting..

Jujansol2 years ago (2 edits)

Iris is ugly as hell?! Wth are you talking about? She's a plain girl, it's exactly as it should be. Iris is what the game is about, more or less, so if you're complaining about her it's better you just stop playing it :/ plus from the comments you've posted you clearly don't know what you're saying. Story's intriguing and every sentence and description is right in its place. I personally play a lot of femdom games, so I know what I'm talking about here. It has so many options to unlock, and the story progresses perfectly. This is my 5th playthrough and I'm still going to replay it when new content is in. It's a damn interactive, choice-based femdom game what do you expect? Car racing or shoot-outs? :v man, fuck off if you don't have anything nice to say about the creator.

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