I think this game has potential but Valentina is just so damn annoying to me I have to keep stopping the game. I don't want to any spoilers but I got as far as her party and I'm just like WTF?! She has a singular focus on what she wants and fuck everyone else. If that's the way you intended her to be, great job, you nailed it.
At any rate I will continue and give a better or more informed comment later.
Just so you know I already hate Valentina and I'm like what 10 minutes into the story, lol. Since the game looks so promising I will push through this difficult period and hope that your writing continues at this level. I like the story so far just not a certain character.