I really, really love your demo! I enjoyed reading through it very much, but it was waaay to short :3
The premise of the story is promising, your writing makes it very easy to instantly get immersed in it.
Especially the perspective of the other characters is very interesting. Seeing my MC through their eyes and getting an idea how they feel about the arrival defently enriches the experience.
Thank you for your hard work, I can't wait for the next update :)